one day students was missing about in the class room than two of the students steel a laptop from the school and then they did and they got caught
by the teacher in the class cause he seen them acting so different than the other student s so he decided to have a look at their bags before they leave the class cause he thought they might be missing about and they didn’t want to take the laptop with them but acutely they were planning to rob the laptop so teacher decided to tell another teacher in the class to make sure that the students doesn’t take the laptop because its expansive laptop and the school might blame him if anything happened in that class if anything missing the school will blame him because he is the teacher of that class so yeah he told the other teacher the other teacher didn’t believe it so he went out from his little office witch is inside the media class room and sat behind them students to see if they really trying to take that laptop with them after he sat behind them the two students felt like there’s something going on so they decided to put the laptop back but it was too late cause the had like 15 minutes left and the teacher were seating behind them so they couldn’t anything about it cause they were too scared to get caught cause if they get caught they might get kick it out from the school and everyone will be chatting crap about them even their friends cause they were in a good school
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A lot more detail here Mohammed, this is more like it! Next you have to break this treatment down into scenes. Once you have identified all the different locations and times, you will have the basis of your script.
ReplyDeleteMuch better!