Tuesday, 11 October 2011

i want my film to be about the new sidney stringer academy  
its going to be about the building  because we just moved to the new building  but i not sure about what i want my story going to be about yet it might  be about what the school changed form the old building
and im going to ask the students about what did they like in here and what they didn't like  
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  1. Mr Pyle16 October 2011 at 06:42

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  2. Mr Pyle16 October 2011 at 06:43

    This is a good start; you have a focus now and a setting where you should be easily able to find good locations.

    You need to work on expanding your treatment to think about what you will specifically be covering over the five minutes of your video.

    Decide upon the quesion areas you might ask and who you will ask.

    Remember your homework is to have completed a three paragraph treatment before next lesson.

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  3. Mr Pyle31 October 2011 at 14:10

    No work done on 18th October. Not impressed at all.

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