sami he's 16 years old student at high school has a girlfriend shelleby and it's her birthday soon and he want get some money for his girl friend to take her out for a meal so she get happy.
he get's caught by the teacher.
but he couldn't get any money so he decides to rob a laptop's from his media class.
he get's caught by the teacher.
A little more detail here and the plot is starting to take shape. You have character names now and more of a reason for the theft. You need to push on now in order to get your treatmjent and script finished. Remember capital letters at the start of sentences and for character names.
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